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Voracious Thirst

Devoured by intensity, words that quench the soul an enchanting intoxication - - like a spirited ****** whetting a voracious thirst, plunging in for another swallow of adoration's satiated climax

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Somdev Chattopadhyay

Date: 12/11/2017 12:32:00 PM

Fabulous one !

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/1/2016 9:26:00 AM

I find I must take small sips from your poetic reservoir lest I drown in splendorific seas. Wowsa! ~ j

Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 9:30:00 AM

Many thanks for this splendorific (love that word) review! :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/6/2016 9:48:00 AM

Can someone please tell me why I am sweating right now, who turned the damn heater on? Paloma, this was a seductive and sensual feast for the eyes and the mind. I may plunge into this one a few more times before I leave.

Paloma P
Date: 10/6/2016 10:14:00 AM

I'm elated you felt the heat Chris! Thanks so much for your fiery response.

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/6/2016 9:07:00 AM

For sure; anything without total commitment is a waste of doing. How sad, to go through life, if looking good (which we all admire), perhaps always saying the right-sounding things, but no truth from depth of emotion translated to living experience. That only real-poetry, such as yours, can do for us. Great write! Thank for sharing.

Paloma P
Date: 10/6/2016 9:12:00 AM

Nice to meet you Joe and thank you for such a glowing review, it's poetic! Much appreciate your passionate viewpoint.