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Voracious Thirst

Devoured by intensity,
  words that quench the soul
an enchanting intoxication - -
    like a spirited ******
      whetting a voracious thirst,  
plunging in for another swallow
   of adoration's satiated climax

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Somdev Chattopadhyay Date: 12/11/2017 12:32:00 PM Fabulous one ! Login to Reply

Lim'Rik Flats Date: 11/1/2016 9:26:00 AM I find I must take small sips from your poetic reservoir lest I drown in splendorific seas. Wowsa! ~ j Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 11/1/2016 9:30:00 AM Many thanks for this splendorific (love that word) review! :)

Chris Green Date: 10/6/2016 9:48:00 AM Can someone please tell me why I am sweating right now, who turned the damn heater on? Paloma, this was a seductive and sensual feast for the eyes and the mind. I may plunge into this one a few more times before I leave. Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 10/6/2016 10:14:00 AM I'm elated you felt the heat Chris! Thanks so much for your fiery response.

Joe Dimino Date: 10/6/2016 9:07:00 AM For sure; anything without total commitment is a waste of doing. How sad, to go through life, if looking good (which we all admire), perhaps always saying the right-sounding things, but no truth from depth of emotion translated to living experience. That only real-poetry, such as yours, can do for us. Great write! Thank for sharing. Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 10/6/2016 9:12:00 AM Nice to meet you Joe and thank you for such a glowing review, it's poetic! Much appreciate your passionate viewpoint.