Notes About The Poem

Inspired by the song, The Windmills of Your Mind”,
from the 1968 film, The Thomas Crown Affair”.
Performed by Dusty Springfield
Available for listening on Youtube

Voodoo

I pricked my finger on a thorn of Voodoo roses felt the stab of crimson and sweet burn of saffron in a tequila sunrise I smelled apples but tasted oranges as a clock chimed with mockingbirds in the chartreuse trill of Spring Summer's cerise burn passed in a steamy haze with the glistening sting of hazelnut sand between my toes and the white capped kisses of salty teal on my face before the cresting of absinthe foothills One chill morning dew appeared on pointed leaves as wisps of cirrus sped in a porcelain sky and salt lay on my cheeks not of bright Pacific dreams As I groped for apricot skies rose petals fell and curled like ashes acrid as whiskey and bitter as gin lost in the gust of October's amber swirl April's scarlet whisper was silent in Autumn umber the seasons having passed in a sapphire moment with the piercing shimmer of Voodoo roses in bloom 10th Place The Poet's Ear Contest Sponsor: Greg Barden Written: 7/16/17 -The Windmills of Your Mind-
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Allison Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 6:39 PM
your imagery is awesome Dale a rainbow of colours scents and smells - I never knew Dusty sang this I only know the Noel Harrison version:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 7:18 PM
Thanks, Jan!
Nusker Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 10:49 AM
Reading you is always a pleasure. Congrats on your win.
Cozart Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 10:59 AM
Thanks very much, Afzal.
Barden Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 1:02 AM
Just a wonderful poem, Dale, and an extraordinary write ... there were SO many that I wanted to include in the top ten, but I just HAD to have this one ... love it! Congrats on TENTH PLACE!!
Cozart Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 8:10 AM
Thanks very much, Greg.
Kiser Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 9:20 AM
One of my favorites now; best of luck in the contest...this one's a winner.
Cozart Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 9:26 AM
Thanks very much, ML!
Robinson Jr. Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 5:05 PM
A brilliant collage of the senses wrapped in an exquisite tapestry of words, Dale. A big WOW poem. Scintillating poetry. Very creatively expressed. Love always.
Cozart Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 5:39 PM
Thanks, Freddie.
Green Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 9:54 AM
What a gorgeous poetic offering my friend. This was soft and demur but so full of life and the colors that bring each day into focus. Best wishes in the contest.
Cozart Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 9:56 AM
Thanks a lot, Chris!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 8:30 AM
A colorful treat! Nice, Dale!
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July 17, 2017 at 9:22 AM
Thanks, Kim!
Sands Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Oh what a poem Dale. You write so well. I hope it does well in the contest ! :)
Cozart Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 8:12 AM
Thanks, Heidi!
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