Vomit

Your trying to put words in my mouth feels pretty barfy to me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ just so ya know

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Joe Maverick

Date: 1/2/2012 12:51:00 PM

This is a gobstopper of a blockage,, you've put togther Nancy,, hope they take note (ha ha) yours Joe...)

M.I.A .

Date: 12/29/2011 8:38:00 PM

got it. nancy, I love your spirit!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/29/2011 10:25:00 AM

you always surprise me, soul sistah... yayy, cool! :) huggs!

Nancy Jones

Date: 12/28/2011 11:43:00 PM

lol... am REALLY glad, on reflection. Your comment wanting me to change my your to you're is all about perspective which is what this poem is all about!!!!! awesome!~N

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/28/2011 11:30:00 PM

Do those words act better than ipecac? Good short write, Nancy. Just change "Your" to "You're" (a contraction of "you are"), and your work will appear correct in every way.

Nancy Jones
Date: 12/28/2011 11:38:00 PM

Thanks Robert, but I didn't mean you're... I meant your... your way of doing things, your way of seeing things, your way of BEING, glad ya dropped by.

Dan Kearley

Date: 12/28/2011 10:15:00 PM

Ha,ha,ha,ha,ha :o)