Vomit

Your trying to put words in my mouth feels pretty barfy to me
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ just so ya know
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Maverick Avatar
January 2, 2012 at 12:51 PM
This is a gobstopper of a blockage,, you've put togther Nancy,, hope they take note (ha ha) yours Joe...)
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December 29, 2011 at 8:38 PM
got it. nancy, I love your spirit!
Onclaud Avatar
December 29, 2011 at 10:25 AM
you always surprise me, soul sistah... yayy, cool! :) huggs!
Jones Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 11:43 PM
lol... am REALLY glad, on reflection. Your comment wanting me to change my your to you're is all about perspective which is what this poem is all about!!!!! awesome!~N
Pettit Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 11:30 PM
Do those words act better than ipecac? Good short write, Nancy. Just change "Your" to "You're" (a contraction of "you are"), and your work will appear correct in every way.
Jones Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 11:38 PM
Thanks Robert, but I didn't mean you're... I meant your... your way of doing things, your way of seeing things, your way of BEING, glad ya dropped by.
Kearley Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 10:15 PM
Ha,ha,ha,ha,ha :o)
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