volcanoes

volcanoes erupt all true life stops and wonders am I next to go

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/9/2024 7:58:00 AM

Would be frightening! Congrats, Robert!

Ink Empress

Date: 12/8/2024 11:39:00 PM

Dear robert! How nice to see you on winners list! You should do more haikus! Youv nailed it! Congratulations on your well deserved win! Sending you light always

Karen Jones

Date: 12/8/2024 11:25:00 PM

A true thought makes a great haiku! Congratulations on your win!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 12/8/2024 7:48:00 PM

True lines, I was just reading about the same happening in Indonesia. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2024 6:43:00 PM

Hey. Way to go on the win. Congratulations!

Ink Empress

Date: 12/5/2024 12:14:00 PM

Dear robert, this is so deep and so impactful, how youv delivered the scenery of volcanoes! You do haikus so well and , i bet anyone in that situation would think the same, are they the next to go, i would have too. Altho i feel like a volcano sometimes . Pleasure reading this! Best wishes if its for a contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/5/2024 12:07:00 PM

yep, that would be awful and true, Robert.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/3/2024 3:44:00 PM

This poem is true to fact. I've survived a big California earthquake.