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Volcano Eruptus

MOLTEN LAVA MILES BELOW, MOUNTING PRESSURE READY TO BLOW. THE EARTH WILL SHAKE AND BEGIN TO RUMBLE. TREES WILL SWAY AND BEGIN TO TUMBLE. VOLCANIC STEAM WILL PIERCE THE SKY. MOLTEN LAVA WILL START TO FLY. THE RELAESE OF PRESSURE WILL BUILD A TOWER. VIEWED FROM SPACE AS A BLOSSOMING FLOWER. ASH AND ROCKS AND TOXIC FUMES, CREATE A DEADLY TOXIC PLUME. MOLTEN LAVA WILL START TO FLOW, FROM ATOP A MOUNTAIN, DOWN BELOW. DESTROYING LIFE, IN A METHODICAL WAY. INCHING ALONG, DAY AFTER DAY. VOLCANO ERUPTUS WILL TAKE ITS TOLL WHEN ALL THE ASHES LAND BELOW.

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Date: 7/26/2017 1:00:00 PM
Same here nice title but the thought is dragging amongst boredom. Dig down inside of yourself and find the seeds of flower power.
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Date: 7/17/2017 10:33:00 AM
Well described and a beautiful piece. A seven! Inch by inch you related what to expect. Take care. Rainbow.
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Date: 7/17/2017 10:06:00 AM
Another great poem Michael. You have some great rhyme in this one. Rumble and Tumble are very poignant! - Dean
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Date: 7/17/2017 8:43:00 AM
Hi Micheal, I enjoyed reading your poem. The line "Viewed from space as s blossoming flower" is beautiful.
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Date: 7/17/2017 8:40:00 AM
A beautiful poetic descriptive poem on an erupting volcano. My compliments , Michael.
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Date: 5/5/2016 1:16:00 PM
This is is fine piece with soul-reaching quality. I love this so much
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Michael E. Harris
Date: 5/5/2016 10:56:00 PM
Thank You Funom for taking the time to read my poetry. And sending a comment.

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