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Volcano

Verdant slopes from afar~
Velvety plains enclave
Versatile soil beneath
Vaporous calm crater
Violent when active
Venomous lava flows
Vexing living things near.




7 May 2021

Syllables checked in How Many Syllables.com ( 6 per line)

For "Pleiades - V Poetry Contest"
Sponsored by Kim Merryman
2nd place

A Brian Strand 1095 Poetry Contest
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Alex Avatar
March 25, 2022 at 9:41 PM
Great verse on Volcano. Congratulations!
George Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 3:52 AM
Beautiful Pleiades on Volcano ! Really enumerates all features of an volcano.....! I understand that this too is a winner !
Ligon Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 10:24 PM
Great descriptions. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 5:37 PM
Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 4:19 PM
i really like yours. Congrats on the win, my friend
Andresen Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 11:35 AM
- Really huge forces of nature, JCB - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Merryman Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 11:34 AM
JCB, I like how you started with the calm and lead up to the explosion. Well done! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Alex Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 11:42 PM
Congratulations!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 4:12 PM
How imaginative description with a few words! A winner, for sure. Love and hugs ~ Mala
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