Volcanic Dawn

Crimson orb

Steals breath.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Callus Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 1:50 PM
Short, but the sight projected can easily leave the viewer breathless! 7:) Regards // paul
Dufresne Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 5:48 AM
It's easy to see you live by the great ones! must be magnificent. Robert
Fringe Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 8:43 PM
Hey Connie. You beautifully display your skill at communicating ideas in a wonderful way. You're wonderful. David
Dietrich Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 2:28 PM
GREAT, Connie. It could even describe a spaceship!!
Smith Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 12:56 PM
nice lil write here only four words but they means something for sure.crimson orb does steal breath and someday we may all be burried benath the volcanic ash.
Freeman Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 12:11 PM
Yes it certainly does Connie. Like the volcano that buried Pompeii in 79AD. Good imagism. Sincerely, Moses
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February 9, 2010 at 7:39 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Connie. Love, Carol
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