Volcanic Dawn

Crimson orb Steals breath.

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/16/2017 1:50:00 PM

Short, but the sight projected can easily leave the viewer breathless! 7:) Regards // paul

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/13/2010 5:48:00 AM

It's easy to see you live by the great ones! must be magnificent. Robert

The Fringe

Date: 2/10/2010 8:43:00 PM

Hey Connie. You beautifully display your skill at communicating ideas in a wonderful way. You're wonderful. David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2010 2:28:00 PM

GREAT, Connie. It could even describe a spaceship!!

Joanna Smith

Date: 2/9/2010 12:56:00 PM

nice lil write here only four words but they means something for sure.crimson orb does steal breath and someday we may all be burried benath the volcanic ash.

John Freeman

Date: 2/9/2010 12:11:00 PM

Yes it certainly does Connie. Like the volcano that buried Pompeii in 79AD. Good imagism. Sincerely, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/9/2010 7:39:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Connie. Love, Carol