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Volatile Weather

When the sun shines Ablaze and about to burst Flames touch the tips of trees Igniting them with shock Bursts of excruciating contentment descends Directing me with the courage for tomorrow Pools of depraved memories wane The lines of sorrow die out in the air When the sun shines When the sun hides Unexpected clouds tumble in to color the sky ashen Casting the shower of days gone by upon your appearance Puddles rematerialize with a commanding poise The reverberations of a virtuous day Days comparable to these are when I finish most dreadful Ambition wearing out of my body When the sun hides

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/21/2012 1:59:00 AM
Hi Samantha, welcome to the Soup. Nicely done free verse - love how you've used the sun shinning and the sun hidding to bring about two different sets of emotions.
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Date: 7/17/2012 10:30:00 PM
Excellent piece here...keep writing!!
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Date: 7/16/2012 11:05:00 PM
I Truly love this pleasr continue posting
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Date: 7/16/2012 8:21:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Samantha. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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