Voids Within Fill

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Voids within fill, magnetism peaks Feel soul’s luminescence Caress divine, joyous heart seeks Yearnings of innocence Although life still does test Ego cravings now rest Love gets load off our chest As bliss throbs thrill Voids within fill 30-August-2021 Quietus

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 8/30/2021 10:45:00 AM

So splendid! “Yearnings of innocence,” a ton to ponder in that! “Bliss throbs thrill,” such a full prism of angles in receipt of this! “Does test ego cravings,” a great view here. In the 2nd line did you mean to not put an apostrophe in souls, as it might help your meaning? Love this poem!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/30/2021 5:03:00 AM

Wonderful. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/30/2021 5:12:00 AM

Thank you, Gina!