Void-centric view

As light ineffable illumining form,
with heart that feels, mind that thinks and senses five,
caressed by the breeze, currents both cool and warm,
the vehicle ensouled seems to be alive,
though it is but dust, swirled about in the storm,
wherein formless presence is he who does jive,
so as that, not this, polarities rotate,
where from the void, we watch torrents in full spate.
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July 26, 2026 at 1:34 AM
Interesting poetry form. May take some more reading to understand your Void-centric view.
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July 26, 2026 at 1:45 AM
in the lucid dream by our heart conjured, if every character with love concurred, what then would remain is a sublime flame, which our lower mind simply cannot name
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