Void Within Fills


Void within fills with magnetism 
Dormant fears yet hinder
Desire bubbles, ego spawned chasm
Touch not burning cinder 

The road is long; enjoy!
Devoid of ego ploy
Light glows within, ahoy!

Bliss overspills
Void within fills

18-October-2021
Quietus

spiritualrhyme

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Reason A. Poteet

October 18, 2021 at 10:22 AM

Like the way you put syllable specs aside when poetic content is the focus. enchantment would be a good synonym for magnetism but less powerful; and vent would rhyme but doesn't have the color of the word chasm. i like the quietus form and must try it sometime. Thanks for the introduction to it.

Unseeking Seeker

October 18, 2021 at 7:38 PM

Sure! Give it a try; there as contest on! Syllables are tricky, different counters give varying results, the above adheres to PS counter though. I’m not a purist for exact rhymes, what’s the point if the message is lost in the process? ~ Magnetism has no substitute, being the closest thing I know of, to describe the feeling of divine electricity pulsating within!