Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Verse

Void Depth of Depression

The sun rose in my sky with promise of color,
on the serene sea I had sailed my boat
                          to reach far shore 
                            of the aimed dreams.

In rootless sapling the buds of hope haven’t flowered,
they’ve all died in void depth of depression.
Storm of anguish seizes the mariner, 
the time is running out fast, the sun will set soon.
        
        When at the rough sea my boat wrecks,
        helpless, I ask my god, “Why me”?
                          
                          The chosen one
                            gets peace in pain.


June 27, 2018
Contest : Fragmented Verse
Sponsored by : Broken Wings-Dear Heart
(Syllable count checked on howmanysyllables.com)

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Constance La France July 25, 2018 at 2:21 PM Subimal congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned piece! Subimal Sinha-Roy July 25, 2018 at 11:15 PM Thank you, Constance for the placement.

Susan Gentry July 25, 2018 at 8:15 AM Congratulations on your win. Can feel the pain in your words. Great imagery of grief. Well done! Subimal Sinha-Roy July 25, 2018 at 11:14 PM Thank you, Susan. I am glad the poem touched you.

Sandra Haight July 23, 2018 at 6:36 PM Such deep despair imaged so well by your metaphors and poetic words, Subimal. Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra Subimal Sinha-Roy July 24, 2018 at 2:39 AM Thank you so much, Sandra.

Connie Marcum Wong July 23, 2018 at 1:26 PM Wow subimal, this poem brilliantly conveys the depth of despair! Congratulations on your third placement my friend. : ) Subimal Sinha-Roy July 24, 2018 at 2:38 AM Thank you for your visit, Connie and for the nice comments.

Anisha Dutta July 23, 2018 at 1:19 PM CONGRATS to win on your wonderful poem. Subimal Sinha-Roy July 24, 2018 at 2:38 AM Thank you so much.