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Void Depth of Depression

The sun rose in my sky with promise of color, on the serene sea I had sailed my boat to reach far shore of the aimed dreams. In rootless sapling the buds of hope haven’t flowered, they’ve all died in void depth of depression. Storm of anguish seizes the mariner, the time is running out fast, the sun will set soon. When at the rough sea my boat wrecks, helpless, I ask my god, “Why me”? The chosen one gets peace in pain. June 27, 2018 Contest : Fragmented Verse Sponsored by : Broken Wings-Dear Heart (Syllable count checked on howmanysyllables.com)

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Date: 7/25/2018 2:21:00 PM
Subimal congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned piece!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/25/2018 11:15:00 PM
Thank you, Constance for the placement.
Date: 7/25/2018 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Can feel the pain in your words. Great imagery of grief. Well done!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/25/2018 11:14:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. I am glad the poem touched you.
Date: 7/23/2018 6:36:00 PM
Such deep despair imaged so well by your metaphors and poetic words, Subimal. Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/24/2018 2:39:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sandra.
Date: 7/23/2018 1:26:00 PM
Wow subimal, this poem brilliantly conveys the depth of despair! Congratulations on your third placement my friend. : )
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/24/2018 2:38:00 AM
Thank you for your visit, Connie and for the nice comments.
Date: 7/23/2018 1:19:00 PM
CONGRATS to win on your wonderful poem.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/24/2018 2:38:00 AM
Thank you so much.

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