Void

I feel this big void
I feel so terrible
Like life doesn’t matter
Nothing means anything
Police sirens
Ambulance sirens
I can’t stand it anymore
I am so empty
Women screw you over
Men take advantage of you
Medicated to the point of not having a life
None of my dreams can come true because no-one supports me
No friends
No family
I am not feeling sorry for myself
This is life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Derseh Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 7:57 AM
Sounds familiar, poetry is a good escape for the soul; however, you need to seek a support system. Write on!
Shaikh Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 4:16 AM
you have very well tried to put the bitter truth of life. I hope this is really not applicable to your life. take care
Burke Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 1:26 PM
Very well put and very true. Love your expressions, your very talented and your self medicating by writing this into a poem ... releasing some private feelings? Claire x
Brown Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 5:46 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Mohammad. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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June 16, 2011 at 5:42 PM
Gave you a 7 on this one. I think everyone goes through low times, this is very realistic. If it is you Mohammad, I hope things get better for you if it's not either way it's a great write. Luv Gail
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