Void

I feel this big void I feel so terrible Like life doesn’t matter Nothing means anything Police sirens Ambulance sirens I can’t stand it anymore I am so empty Women screw you over Men take advantage of you Medicated to the point of not having a life None of my dreams can come true because no-one supports me No friends No family I am not feeling sorry for myself This is life

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Bethlehem Derseh

Date: 6/19/2011 7:57:00 AM

Sounds familiar, poetry is a good escape for the soul; however, you need to seek a support system. Write on!

Nilofar Shaikh

Date: 6/19/2011 4:16:00 AM

you have very well tried to put the bitter truth of life. I hope this is really not applicable to your life. take care

Claire Burke

Date: 6/17/2011 1:26:00 PM

Very well put and very true. Love your expressions, your very talented and your self medicating by writing this into a poem ... releasing some private feelings? Claire x

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/17/2011 5:46:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Mohammad. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Date: 6/16/2011 5:42:00 PM

Gave you a 7 on this one. I think everyone goes through low times, this is very realistic. If it is you Mohammad, I hope things get better for you if it's not either way it's a great write. Luv Gail