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Voices of the Falls

Stories of past love,
Deafening thoughts spoken aloud:
Romantic cascades.

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Nicole Sharon Brown

November 20, 2009 at 7:14 AM

Congrats on feature poem this week!

Janette Fisher

November 18, 2009 at 10:50 AM

Congrats on your Haiku being featured this week. Lovely imagery. Rgds Janette

Iolanda Scripca

November 16, 2009 at 8:58 PM

Congratulations for being featured this week. Love, Iolanda

Brandee Augustus

November 16, 2009 at 2:29 PM

I like how you almost personified the waterfalls by letting us see it as the both the pain and the beauty that comes when you love someone. Love the last line especially. I almost forgot you were talking about water for a second. Congratulations on getting this featured!

Andrew Crisci

November 16, 2009 at 12:38 PM

Hi, Raul! Congratulations on your beautiful Haiku being posted this week. Kindest Regards, Andrew.

James Fraser

November 16, 2009 at 10:28 AM

Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week Raul >> James

P Sheart

November 16, 2009 at 9:51 AM

Congrats Raul on your beautiful feature poem this week! Love Light Patty

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 16, 2009 at 5:13 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Raul. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

November 15, 2009 at 11:31 PM

Congrats on your feature poem this week Raul.Rgds Brian

November 15, 2009 at 7:17 PM

You are quite the master conveying thoughts in a concise manner. I really like the last line in this one. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen