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Voices of the Falls

Stories of past love,
Deafening thoughts spoken aloud:
Romantic cascades.

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Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 11/20/2009 7:14:00 AM

Congrats on feature poem this week!

Janette Fisher

Date: 11/18/2009 10:50:00 AM

Congrats on your Haiku being featured this week. Lovely imagery. Rgds Janette

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 11/16/2009 8:58:00 PM

Congratulations for being featured this week. Love, Iolanda

Brandee Augustus

Date: 11/16/2009 2:29:00 PM

I like how you almost personified the waterfalls by letting us see it as the both the pain and the beauty that comes when you love someone. Love the last line especially. I almost forgot you were talking about water for a second. Congratulations on getting this featured!

Andrew Crisci

Date: 11/16/2009 12:38:00 PM

Hi, Raul! Congratulations on your beautiful Haiku being posted this week. Kindest Regards, Andrew.

James Fraser

Date: 11/16/2009 10:28:00 AM

Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week Raul >> James

P Sheart

Date: 11/16/2009 9:51:00 AM

Congrats Raul on your beautiful feature poem this week! Love Light Patty

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/16/2009 5:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Raul. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 11/15/2009 11:31:00 PM

Congrats on your feature poem this week Raul.Rgds Brian

Date: 11/15/2009 7:17:00 PM

You are quite the master conveying thoughts in a concise manner. I really like the last line in this one. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen