Voices Drowned Out

Roosters crow Cock-a-doodle-do Crickets hum Jimminey An eighteen wheeler heads out Voices drowned out

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Bl Devnath

Date: 8/25/2012 10:38:00 AM

Your fantastic weekend with fantastic poems. Loved always, bl

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/24/2012 3:37:00 PM

You've captured the drive..L O L..) and impersonality of life events here Sara..

Jack Horne

Date: 8/24/2012 2:59:00 PM

LOL, yes, very true - love the cricket humming Jimminey : )

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/23/2012 6:05:00 PM

nice one! it's so true and so well said!

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/23/2012 3:44:00 PM

Voices get drowned out whenever a Boeing 747 takes off as well. Good entry if it is for the contest.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/23/2012 3:21:00 PM

Ah, the realities of life having the eighteen wheeler as part of your poem! It may not be natural but it is real! I really enjoyed this fun loving poem my friend! This is a special write, if for the contest it will do well! Wonderful piece, Great Work!!