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"do i deserve to be happy or do i deserve to be dead?" the thirteen words that echo in my head every night while i lay in bed and not even the sound which is made by the rain when it hits the concrete can distract me from these voices which i cannot seem to defeat "do it" they say "they won't miss you at all" i fall and i fall i scratch and i bawl and their voices have got me like a dog on a leash they relentlessly faught me and they i cannot beat

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Date: 4/17/2024 1:11:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/8/2016 1:18:00 PM
ENJOYING THIS ONE AGAIN
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Date: 9/17/2015 7:09:00 PM
Really good read, I'm glad you shared such a deep piece of excellence :) Would be you be kind enough to take a look at my page that looks into the Gothic art form :) please feel free to like and share it as well! :) https://www.facebook.com/Raven3.gothic?ref=hl Many thank!
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Date: 5/19/2015 10:08:00 AM
This is deep Bella, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/18/2015 10:38:00 AM
Bella, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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