Voices

and I know
or
I guess
it maybe
that
I am
  to be
    pleased
with thee:
my love
  it shall
  be you
out of all
   the earth:
come..
but not here
      not there
but
for ever
&
through
all of time..
be
   mine

A phrasis inspired by Whitman phrases the Song of Myself
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Makama Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 12:26 PM
Beautiful... So beautiful! Keep it up souper.
Strand Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 1:44 PM
Thanks Funom
Ashley Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 8:10 AM
Your poem’s emotion is expressed with delicate beauty, Brian. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Strand Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 9:08 AM
Susan your encouragement is always a blessing and motivation for a poet.Have a good day
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