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life has somewhat calmed down now that I’ve bowed out from the rat race and officially finally now retired I’ve learned to disentangle myself from the merciless mundane madness I don’t miss that old hamster wheel forever spinning out of control I’m now at peace with myself I’ve become my own judge and jury questioning my every choice and decision to ensure all align with my master plan the voice of my conscience keeps me on the straight and narrow as time trickles away ultimately I know I’m not really in charge but I can at least be master of what I can one day I know I will face my Maker and there will be no sanctioned excuses down to my core I’d want to be proud of what I’ve done and become AP: 1st place 2021 Posted on August 12, 2021

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Date: 8/17/2021 1:19:00 AM
The alliteration of this line drew me in. "I’ve learned to disentangle myself from the merciless mundane madness" the rest of the poem kept me reading.
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Date: 8/17/2021 3:45:00 AM
Thanks, Caren ~
Date: 8/15/2021 7:58:00 PM
Control at least somewhat of a delusion.
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Date: 8/17/2021 3:45:00 AM
So very true, Gershon ~

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