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Voice

I had a vision in the dark Burned so hard it left it's mark "Follow me into hell and back, if you don't, your life will never come back." Said a voice I closed my eyes and what I saw Left me confused, left me in awe Saw the darkness and I saw the fire Then I was gripped and brought higher By the voice When we made it back I thought How I had been brought Back from hell, back from the brink Made me confused, made me think About the voice We went to hell and back again It did not matter when He had showed me struggle and strife Showed me more terrible things existed than my life The voice taught My vision was ending, I spoke fast But my chance to ask had past I left my vision and fell back to sleep My life would stay, I would always keep The voice near

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/4/2008 3:26:00 PM
cool
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Date: 10/17/2008 7:55:00 PM
Do you want number so we don't have to discuss personal things on here?? No strings attached I promise. . .
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Date: 10/17/2008 7:54:00 PM
I can relate. . . I mean I hear voices and see things that aren't really there. . . And again I'm terriblly sorry. . . . .
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