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The third worst poetry in the universe, Vogon poetry. Apparently the Soup allows...lol

shoulda ben rimes in timing, short of I am bik meteor. a lit a bit of funning, co lab adorashun with fella slurpers, alfa betting by tossing in a bowl or turning in a flying bed, as sheep are worn out by leaps and counting, running on sentences, perhaps cross ref rencing guilty teens and hanging dirty laundry for all two see, hang ink on lim or icks, as i transverse the u and verse, o go on u say and i shell simmer in a pot, hoping its the won of gold but i dont want no leper con and rain bow or stoopid cupid to steal my home in outer space, so i scribble a crostic

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Date: 1/19/2025 9:32:00 PM
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/20/2025 5:02:00 AM
LOL!
Date: 1/16/2025 7:23:00 PM
Woah, Kim - this is so genius for what form you're writing in...could not have done it better myself. :) Such a sense of humor, but it's so well done, like Daniel said, a little raw, . loved it - hey what is "hang ink on lim or icks" dear poetess, I am sorry...I just couldn't wrap my head around it....can you tell me? :)
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Paige Hind
Date: 1/16/2025 9:13:00 PM
Wait a minute, I read it again and got it. How silly, lol - limericks...:)
Date: 1/16/2025 6:54:00 AM
Dear Kim, First I have to say...it’s like diving headfirst into a wild, cosmic word storm. I really found it to be raw, playful, and unapologetically you. I love how it skips along the edges of absurdity while still managing to feel deeply personal. Okay, I loved the tossing letters in a bowl or scribbling acrostics while dodging clichés (leprechauns and all!) is so relatable yet hilariously unique. Pure Gold! Winter Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2025 9:59:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel, for making my day. Winter blessings and smiles ~ Kim
Date: 1/15/2025 10:33:00 AM
This is very creative. Good job :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2025 12:13:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi :)
Date: 1/15/2025 8:45:00 AM
- Vogon poetry is not quite my style... but fun to try... you made a great entry, Kim... good luck :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2025 9:09:00 AM
Not mine either, but why not :) Thank you and hugs
Date: 1/15/2025 7:01:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative write. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed day writing away...................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2025 9:09:00 AM
Thank you! I just had fun with it! :)

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