Vogon and Done It Now

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The third worst poetry in the universe, Vogon poetry. Apparently the Soup allows...lol

shoulda ben rimes in timing, short of
I am bik meteor. a lit a bit of funning,
co lab adorashun with fella slurpers,
alfa betting by tossing in a bowl

or turning in a flying bed, as sheep
are worn out by leaps and counting,
running on sentences, perhaps
cross ref rencing guilty teens

and hanging dirty laundry
for all two see, hang ink on
lim or icks, as i transverse
the u and verse,

o go on u say and i shell
simmer in a pot, hoping
its the won of gold
but i dont want no

leper con and rain bow
or stoopid cupid to steal
my home in outer space,
so i scribble a crostic

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/19/2025 9:32:00 PM

echka hogra meczswrg, indefilpxx. Wqrklnb, gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/20/2025 5:02:00 AM

LOL!

Paige Hind

Date: 1/16/2025 7:23:00 PM

Woah, Kim - this is so genius for what form you're writing in...could not have done it better myself. :) Such a sense of humor, but it's so well done, like Daniel said, a little raw, . loved it - hey what is "hang ink on lim or icks" dear poetess, I am sorry...I just couldn't wrap my head around it....can you tell me? :)

Paige Hind
Date: 1/16/2025 9:13:00 PM

Wait a minute, I read it again and got it. How silly, lol - limericks...:)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/16/2025 6:54:00 AM

Dear Kim, First I have to say...it’s like diving headfirst into a wild, cosmic word storm. I really found it to be raw, playful, and unapologetically you. I love how it skips along the edges of absurdity while still managing to feel deeply personal. Okay, I loved the tossing letters in a bowl or scribbling acrostics while dodging clichés (leprechauns and all!) is so relatable yet hilariously unique. Pure Gold! Winter Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2025 9:59:00 AM

Thank you, Daniel, for making my day. Winter blessings and smiles ~ Kim