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Vividly Colored Blackness

colors
so many colors
bubbling forth from places
from which bubbles know no bounds
sunlight piercing
through useable darkness
unnoticeable to warmly clothed eyes
as we walk unnoticed 
to our favorite haunt
beautifully vivid blackness surrounds us
our supposed friends 
don’t notice 
the obviously noticed obvious
and we love and revel
to our walking souls
leading each other as turns are taken
to a store
to our store
and music fills the emptiness that all others feel
upon our arrival 
our sources
seen only to us
and our hidden 
and unwritten eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/9/2009 7:04:00 PM
i have to agree, the title is quite amazing. nice imagery as well. new poems are always fun ;)
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