Viva Voce

in a single breath

just seventeen syllables-

to an open mike
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2010 at 6:58 AM
sounds like you were reading a haiku! And I but it was awesome! Luv,andrea
Kendrick Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 11:33 AM
And they were floored you forgot to add. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
Haick Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 10:04 AM
Delightful! Sounds like a plan! As usual, great, Brian! Thanks for reading my poem. Peace, Audrey
George   Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 9:47 AM
A living voice or (By word of Mouth) reciting a Senryu's or Haiku's. Sounds like a wonderful idea. lainie
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 9:08 AM
Very nice senryu, Brian. Open mike... Do you organize poetry readings? I think it would be marvelous to read ones own poetry to word connoisseurs. (Unless you were audience shy, like me.) Or to hear someone else read your poetry... That would really be fun! Have a super day. Smiles, Dane Ann (& thank you for your kind comments today.)
Sweetheart Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 8:43 AM
Great imagery in your Senryu.. I can just see it.. testing testing... can u hear me now? kind of scenario... title ..awesome.. luv.. blessings... thankxxx for air mailing your book.. will let u know when I receive.. anxiously awaiting it... Linda-Marie..
Kelly Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 2:30 AM
And then you hear that famous sound ;" Testing , Testing : 1 . 2 . 1 ... Testing .... Great 17 from you , as was your prize , recently received . Many thanks again ...
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