Viva Voce

in a single breath just seventeen syllables- to an open mike

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2010 6:58:00 AM

sounds like you were reading a haiku! And I but it was awesome! Luv,andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/27/2010 11:33:00 AM

And they were floored you forgot to add. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/27/2010 10:04:00 AM

Delightful! Sounds like a plan! As usual, great, Brian! Thanks for reading my poem. Peace, Audrey

Elaine George

Date: 1/27/2010 9:47:00 AM

A living voice or (By word of Mouth) reciting a Senryu's or Haiku's. Sounds like a wonderful idea. lainie

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/27/2010 9:08:00 AM

Very nice senryu, Brian. Open mike... Do you organize poetry readings? I think it would be marvelous to read ones own poetry to word connoisseurs. (Unless you were audience shy, like me.) Or to hear someone else read your poetry... That would really be fun! Have a super day. Smiles, Dane Ann (& thank you for your kind comments today.)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/27/2010 8:43:00 AM

Great imagery in your Senryu.. I can just see it.. testing testing... can u hear me now? kind of scenario... title ..awesome.. luv.. blessings... thankxxx for air mailing your book.. will let u know when I receive.. anxiously awaiting it... Linda-Marie..

Sean Kelly

Date: 1/27/2010 2:30:00 AM

And then you hear that famous sound ;" Testing , Testing : 1 . 2 . 1 ... Testing .... Great 17 from you , as was your prize , recently received . Many thanks again ...