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Vitamin Sea

I went to the beach 
For my vitamin sea
To drink in the zing 
Of an orange setting sun  
As it spritzed liquid gold
Onto zesty shimmering sand 

© Brenda V northeast   6th January   2012

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Robert Pettit

January 11, 2012 at 3:05 AM

People can get their vitamin D from basking in the sunshine. Vitamin C (ascorbic acid) is water soluble and is usually obtained by consuming citrus fruits and green leafy vegetables. Nevertheless, your poem is impressively descriptive.

Brenda Victoria Northeast

January 11, 2012 at 5:12 AM

Thank you Robert for your kind comments, it was the overall effect of the orange sunset that conjured the Vit C/SEA play on words and images- thank you for your input, blessings, Brenda : )

Maureen Lefanue

January 10, 2012 at 4:29 AM

Dear Brenda, It's people like you who enable me to say "Why I Love truly PoetrySoup". You are so kind. God bless, Maureen :)

Brenda Victoria Northeast

January 11, 2012 at 5:07 AM

Thank you Maureen, Love and blessings, Brenda

Maureen Lefanue

January 9, 2012 at 9:22 PM

Thank you Brenda for your kind comments. I messed up the poem by cutting it down to 15 lines, but glad you still were able to enjoy it! Love, M :)

Brenda Victoria Northeast

January 11, 2012 at 5:06 AM

Sacrifice in length is hazardous sometimes to a poem, but your poem certainly read well so need not fear Maureen your inspiring message was heart felt. Love, Brenda : )