Vitality

The gold of daybreak Casting light upon the sea The sound of the surge And regression of each wave Restores life and love in me The scent of the ocean's water Brings vitality to my mind How lucky are the fish Who live there all the time

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Daniel Mcgraw

Date: 1/4/2010 10:09:00 AM

This is awesome! keep it up girl! -daniel

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/22/2009 5:00:00 PM

yet slimey!!LOL

John Freeman

Date: 12/21/2009 3:43:00 PM

Awesome, Sara, you portray such a spiritual connection to nature surroundings. Very depth of being. Sincerely, Love, Moses

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/21/2009 10:31:00 AM

A lyrical masterpiece

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 12/20/2009 4:36:00 PM

Indeed! And how great we have such a creation that inspires us this way! Wonderful write, Sara. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on my poem as always. Merry Christmas and happy new year 2010! Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/20/2009 9:01:00 AM

Brings vitality back to me also Sara .. I do like "restores life and love in me" ..very poignant line to your poem.. excellent write this Sunday... blessings... luv... thankxxx for enjoying my reads also... happy Sunday...