Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Vitality

The gold of daybreak
Casting light upon the sea
The sound of the surge
And regression of each wave
Restores life and love in me

The scent of the ocean's water
Brings vitality to my mind
How lucky are the fish
Who live there all the time

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Daniel Mcgraw January 4, 2010 at 10:09 AM This is awesome! keep it up girl! -daniel

Doris Culverhouse December 22, 2009 at 5:00 PM yet slimey!!LOL

John Freeman December 21, 2009 at 3:43 PM Awesome, Sara, you portray such a spiritual connection to nature surroundings. Very depth of being. Sincerely, Love, Moses

L'Nass Shango December 21, 2009 at 10:31 AM A lyrical masterpiece

Caroline Cécile Delacroix December 20, 2009 at 4:36 PM Indeed! And how great we have such a creation that inspires us this way! Wonderful write, Sara. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on my poem as always. Merry Christmas and happy new year 2010! Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 20, 2009 at 9:01 AM Brings vitality back to me also Sara .. I do like "restores life and love in me" ..very poignant line to your poem.. excellent write this Sunday... blessings... luv... thankxxx for enjoying my reads also... happy Sunday...