Daniel Turner Poet Couplet

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Visualize, Scrutinize and Remark - For Contest

The add said," Need model, eight hours, no nudes
No mention anywhere about bringing toe shoes

I should've taken a moment to pin up my bangs
These artists must be thinking I look rather strange

It would've been easier in a different pose
They draw so slowly and I feel quite exposed

These cramps in my toes are really starting to ache
Now I'm wondering how long before I get a break

The man said five hundred dollars is what the job pays
Which is good because I won't be walking for days



     by Daniel Turner

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Poet Destroyer A March 20, 2016 at 10:16 AM Anytime Daniel... Hope you are well. Linda Daniel Turner March 20, 2016 at 10:17 AM Check out my last poem and get yourself a smile:):) Peace my friend:)

Poet Destroyer A March 20, 2016 at 12:58 AM Hi Daniel, Congrats on your awesome win. XOX ~LINDA~ :) Daniel Turner March 20, 2016 at 6:38 AM Thank you, Linda. I appreciate the flowers. Peace my friend:)

Jean Murray March 20, 2016 at 12:53 AM You're too hard to beat! Congratulations.

Teddy Kimathi March 17, 2016 at 4:06 AM Congrats Daniel, for that awesome poem's WIN in the contest!!! ;-) Daniel Turner March 17, 2016 at 6:00 AM Thank you, Teddy. I appreciate you kindness and your friendship. Peace my friend:)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 16, 2016 at 11:13 PM Wonderful write n win Daniel.. big congrats! Daniel Turner March 16, 2016 at 11:24 PM Thank you, Upma. I appreciate your friendship. You are always so kind and supportive. Have a great evening Doc and Peace:):)

Lin Lane March 16, 2016 at 6:03 PM Well done on this one, Danny. Congrats. Daniel Turner March 16, 2016 at 6:11 PM Thank you, Peaches. I really am happy to see your smiling photo:):) Hope you are well. Peace my dear friend:)

Beautiful Scars March 16, 2016 at 4:46 PM DT, many congrats on your placement in the contest!-luloo :) Daniel Turner March 16, 2016 at 5:01 PM Thank you, Laura. I appreciate your friendly visits and your kind comments. Peace my friend:)

Sandra Haight March 16, 2016 at 2:59 PM I like your take on this, Daniel! Congrats on being on the winner's list! Sandra Daniel Turner March 16, 2016 at 3:08 PM Thank you, Ms. Sandra. It's the first I've heard about it. I appreciate your kindness and your friendship. The flowers are beautiful:):)

Daniel Turner March 2, 2016 at 5:36 PM Thank you, Ms. Sun. I wasn't really aimimg for humor it just turned out that way. I appreciate your kindness as always. Mahalo:)

Walter T. Ashe March 2, 2016 at 12:13 PM :-) :-) The humor oozes!!! May you have many more $500 days! Daniel Turner March 2, 2016 at 12:16 PM Thank you, Walter my friend. Just keep smiling:)