Visual Imprints

Rain falls from blue erected sky.
Optical illusions reply.
Sun dance under a palm tree's shade
with barefoot flights of sparkling jade.
Smooth curves are shaped from image nigh.

Sculpted clouds refract light on high
through hazel kaleidoscope eyes.
Love forms circles and dull lines fade
Rain falls from blue.

A starry jewel waves warm goodbyes
on whispers of wind soft and shy.
Full prism moons rise unafraid
from bright mosaic visions made.
A mirage on falcon's wing flies.
Rain falls from blue.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 9:13 AM
Enjoyed reading your work shown on homepage..Congrats on being selected..Sara
Brown Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 6:10 AM
Congratulations on the win Rhonda. Love, Carol
Song Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 4:15 PM
That 2nd stanza just takes my breath away...starry jewels of wind soft and shy...very suave! I am fav'n this one...so nice! Hope u are doing well, Rhonda. :) gwendolen
Williams Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 2:36 PM
Rhonda congrats on your win...love it..David
Kendrick Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 4:03 PM
Very poetic and creative work...Enjoyed reading this eve..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
K. Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 10:59 AM
What a very beautiful and picturesque poem, Rhonda! I love your last line here! Hugs and thank you for passing by my poem :)
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June 28, 2012 at 2:17 AM
A poem with quality Rhonda - beautiful. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Hu Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 12:43 AM
So amazingly beautiful:)
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June 27, 2012 at 10:10 PM
Wonderful!!!
Sivey Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 9:05 PM
This is a fabulous and incredible write! I just love blue sky showers! Great Work!!
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