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Vistas Paint Motifs

Vistas paint motifs applauding your passion
Granting my evening glimpses of splendor
Sponsoring your appeal in ecstatic fashion
Enamored by our love delicate and tender

Granting my evening glimpses of splendor
Cherry blossoms sway dancing in revival
Enamored by our love delicate and tender
As moon peeks coyly cheering your arrival

Cherry blossoms sway dancing in revival
Declaring I love you with breezy emotions
As moon peeks coyly cheering your arrival
Flexing night tides to ride bouncy oceans

Declaring I love you with breezy emotions
Night departed bringing panoramic vision 
Flexing night tides to ride bouncy oceans
As rising horizon mounts a scenic revision

Night departed bringing panoramic vision 
Welcoming golden rays of budding sunrise
As rising horizon mounts a scenic revision
Announcing congruence of romantic prize 

Welcoming golden rays of budding sunrise
Sponsoring your appeal in ecstatic fashion
Announcing congruence of romantic prize 
Vistas paint motifs applauding your passion

April 3, 2018
Love Poem contest by Heidi Sands
First Place

Copyright © Vijay Pandit | Year Posted 2018

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Vladislav Raven Date: 11/16/2018 9:59:00 AM Hi Vijay, again you sing beautiful, within the Pantoum form. Love and the Pantoum form can go so well together. In your hands, love does sing supreme within a Pantoum dream. I love the content and the images of passion displayed. Excellent work Vijay, so enjoyed this read. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike. Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 4/11/2018 11:26:00 PM Lovely, Vijay. Congrats on your gold medal finish. Login to Reply

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 4/9/2018 1:04:00 AM Congratulations, Vijay on your great win with such a beautifully flowing poem. Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 4/8/2018 10:27:00 AM Hi Vijay, You have penned such a well written Pantoum that's filled with love and passion. Good imagery and content. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/8/2018 4:07:00 PM Thank you Alexis.

Paul Callus Date: 4/8/2018 5:35:00 AM What a beautiful Pantoum, Vijay! Love, passion and captivating imagery blend to produce an awesome result. Congratulations on your high flying win! Regards // paul Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/8/2018 4:07:00 PM Thank you Paul.

Susan Gentry Date: 4/7/2018 2:12:00 AM Congratulations on your win with this beautiful Pantoum about love. Excellent! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/7/2018 6:54:00 AM Thank you Susan.

Kyle Kriticos Date: 4/6/2018 8:28:00 AM This was masterfully written! Another really great depiction Vijay!~ Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/6/2018 2:06:00 PM Thank you Kyle.

Jean Murray Date: 4/6/2018 5:31:00 AM I applaud your passion for poetry Vijay and congratulate you on your win. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/6/2018 2:06:00 PM Thank you Jean.

Heidi Sands Date: 4/5/2018 9:02:00 AM Thank you for entering my contest Vijay. I love this pantoum. Very well done. Congratulations for your win :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/5/2018 3:46:00 PM Thank you Heidi..appreciate your kind feedback.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/4/2018 7:46:00 PM A very pretty pantoum love poem this is, Vijay. Best of luck in the contest. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/5/2018 6:46:00 AM Thank you Andrea.

Eve Roper Date: 4/4/2018 11:59:00 AM Excellent ..well written Pantoum poem, Vijay, beautiful with great imagery :) luck in the contest ..hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/4/2018 3:06:00 PM Thank you Eve.

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/4/2018 10:32:00 AM now, vijay, i am sighing... what an appealing tinge of love in its graceful sway!.. huggs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/4/2018 10:49:00 AM Thank you nette.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/4/2018 9:07:00 AM Gorgeous. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/4/2018 10:49:00 AM Thank you Richard.

J.W. Earnings Date: 4/4/2018 5:45:00 AM This is a wonderful verse! Thanks for sharing on Psoup. Have a nice and sunny week. -JWE Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/4/2018 7:12:00 AM Thank for your visit and comments, JW.

Supraja Kannan Date: 4/4/2018 2:29:00 AM Wow... So beautifully written... Nice flow and great rhymes... Definitely a winner... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/4/2018 7:11:00 AM Thank you Supraja.

Winged Warrior Date: 4/3/2018 8:35:00 PM A phenomenal pantoum Vijay...best for the win my friend...stay in the light...^WW^ Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/4/2018 7:10:00 AM Thank you WW!

Arturo Michael Date: 4/3/2018 2:45:00 PM Tell me Vijay...This form I don't know...Is it 4-3 4-3 4-3...repeated lines...Although I read...I can only conclude the above...Is it so...How do you see it...All the best my friend Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/7/2018 7:30:00 AM I would love to read your Pantoum Arturo. I think this is a great form for your great themes I have been reading. Arturo Michael Date: 4/3/2018 6:51:00 PM I got lost...I'll take my time and feel it...wanted to participate in a form you and SO were doing...but I should really feel it first...then I would listen...in the real world that's a lot of pain...Thank you Vijay... wanted your feeling of it...All the best Vijay Pandit Date: 4/3/2018 4:14:00 PM Instead of writing my own long explanation, I am copying below what Silent One wrote about this form in his recent poems: A rare form of poetry. It is composed of a series of quatrains; the second and fourth lines of each stanza are repeated as the first and third lines of the next. This pattern continues for any number of stanzas, except for the final stanza, which differs in the repeating pattern. The first and third lines of the last stanza are the second and fourth of the penultimate; the first line of the poem is the last line of the final stanza, and the third line of the first stanza is the second of the final. Ideally, the meaning of lines shifts when they are repeated although the words remain exactly the same: this can be done by shifting punctuation, punning, or simply recontextualizing.

Kudzai Mhangwa Date: 4/3/2018 1:01:00 PM Beautiful images you paint Vijay. Always refreshing to read your work, I had missed it. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/3/2018 1:16:00 PM Thank you Kudzai.

Silent One Date: 4/3/2018 12:56:00 PM This is one of my fave forms and you have done it so well... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/3/2018 1:15:00 PM Thank you Silent One.

Maria Williams Date: 4/3/2018 8:29:00 AM 'Vistas paint motifs applauding your passion' - magnificent and powerfully romantic write Vijay. Loved it and it's worthy of top honors my friend. Maria :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/3/2018 1:15:00 PM Thank you Maria.

Mike Gentile Date: 4/3/2018 7:45:00 AM The Vistas are passionately portrayed in your wonderfully romantic poem full of beautiful imagery, Good Luck in the contest!! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/3/2018 1:15:00 PM Thank you Mike.

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 4/3/2018 7:34:00 AM Very different kind of romantic poem, Vijay. I mean that in a good way. It is very cerebral. Fabulous lines ... As rising horizon mounts a scenic revision. Announcing congruence of romantic prize. Wonderful poem. Love and joy always. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/3/2018 1:14:00 PM Thank you Freddie.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 4/3/2018 7:00:00 AM Explosion of poetic beauty my dear friend, Vijay! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/3/2018 1:14:00 PM Thank you Demetrios.