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Vistas Paint Motifs

Vistas paint motifs applauding your passion Granting my evening glimpses of splendor Sponsoring your appeal in ecstatic fashion Enamored by our love delicate and tender Granting my evening glimpses of splendor Cherry blossoms sway dancing in revival Enamored by our love delicate and tender As moon peeks coyly cheering your arrival Cherry blossoms sway dancing in revival Declaring I love you with breezy emotions As moon peeks coyly cheering your arrival Flexing night tides to ride bouncy oceans Declaring I love you with breezy emotions Night departed bringing panoramic vision Flexing night tides to ride bouncy oceans As rising horizon mounts a scenic revision Night departed bringing panoramic vision Welcoming golden rays of budding sunrise As rising horizon mounts a scenic revision Announcing congruence of romantic prize Welcoming golden rays of budding sunrise Sponsoring your appeal in ecstatic fashion Announcing congruence of romantic prize Vistas paint motifs applauding your passion April 3, 2018 Love Poem contest by Heidi Sands First Place

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/16/2018 9:59:00 AM

Hi Vijay, again you sing beautiful, within the Pantoum form. Love and the Pantoum form can go so well together. In your hands, love does sing supreme within a Pantoum dream. I love the content and the images of passion displayed. Excellent work Vijay, so enjoyed this read. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/11/2018 11:26:00 PM

Lovely, Vijay. Congrats on your gold medal finish.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 4/9/2018 1:04:00 AM

Congratulations, Vijay on your great win with such a beautifully flowing poem.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/8/2018 10:27:00 AM

Hi Vijay, You have penned such a well written Pantoum that's filled with love and passion. Good imagery and content. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/8/2018 4:07:00 PM

Thank you Alexis.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/8/2018 5:35:00 AM

What a beautiful Pantoum, Vijay! Love, passion and captivating imagery blend to produce an awesome result. Congratulations on your high flying win! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/8/2018 4:07:00 PM

Thank you Paul.

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/7/2018 2:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this beautiful Pantoum about love. Excellent!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/7/2018 6:54:00 AM

Thank you Susan.

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 4/6/2018 8:28:00 AM

This was masterfully written! Another really great depiction Vijay!~

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/6/2018 2:06:00 PM

Thank you Kyle.

Jean Murray

Date: 4/6/2018 5:31:00 AM

I applaud your passion for poetry Vijay and congratulate you on your win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/6/2018 2:06:00 PM

Thank you Jean.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/5/2018 9:02:00 AM

Thank you for entering my contest Vijay. I love this pantoum. Very well done. Congratulations for your win :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/5/2018 3:46:00 PM

Thank you Heidi..appreciate your kind feedback.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2018 7:46:00 PM

A very pretty pantoum love poem this is, Vijay. Best of luck in the contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/5/2018 6:46:00 AM

Thank you Andrea.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/4/2018 11:59:00 AM

Excellent ..well written Pantoum poem, Vijay, beautiful with great imagery :) luck in the contest ..hugs Eve ~`*

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/4/2018 3:06:00 PM

Thank you Eve.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/4/2018 10:32:00 AM

now, vijay, i am sighing... what an appealing tinge of love in its graceful sway!.. huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/4/2018 10:49:00 AM

Thank you nette.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/4/2018 9:07:00 AM

Gorgeous.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/4/2018 10:49:00 AM

Thank you Richard.

J.W. Earnings

Date: 4/4/2018 5:45:00 AM

This is a wonderful verse! Thanks for sharing on Psoup. Have a nice and sunny week. -JWE

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/4/2018 7:12:00 AM

Thank for your visit and comments, JW.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 4/4/2018 2:29:00 AM

Wow... So beautifully written... Nice flow and great rhymes... Definitely a winner...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/4/2018 7:11:00 AM

Thank you Supraja.

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/3/2018 8:35:00 PM

A phenomenal pantoum Vijay...best for the win my friend...stay in the light...^WW^

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/4/2018 7:10:00 AM

Thank you WW!

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/3/2018 2:45:00 PM

Tell me Vijay...This form I don't know...Is it 4-3 4-3 4-3...repeated lines...Although I read...I can only conclude the above...Is it so...How do you see it...All the best my friend

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/7/2018 7:30:00 AM

I would love to read your Pantoum Arturo. I think this is a great form for your great themes I have been reading.

Arturo Michael
Date: 4/3/2018 6:51:00 PM

I got lost...I'll take my time and feel it...wanted to participate in a form you and SO were doing...but I should really feel it first...then I would listen...in the real world that's a lot of pain...Thank you Vijay... wanted your feeling of it...All the best

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/3/2018 4:14:00 PM

Instead of writing my own long explanation, I am copying below what Silent One wrote about this form in his recent poems: A rare form of poetry. It is composed of a series of quatrains; the second and fourth lines of each stanza are repeated as the first and third lines of the next. This pattern continues for any number of stanzas, except for the final stanza, which differs in the repeating pattern. The first and third lines of the last stanza are the second and fourth of the penultimate; the first line of the poem is the last line of the final stanza, and the third line of the first stanza is the second of the final. Ideally, the meaning of lines shifts when they are repeated although the words remain exactly the same: this can be done by shifting punctuation, punning, or simply recontextualizing.

Kudzai Mhangwa

Date: 4/3/2018 1:01:00 PM

Beautiful images you paint Vijay. Always refreshing to read your work, I had missed it.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/3/2018 1:16:00 PM

Thank you Kudzai.

Silent One

Date: 4/3/2018 12:56:00 PM

This is one of my fave forms and you have done it so well...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/3/2018 1:15:00 PM

Thank you Silent One.

Maria Williams

Date: 4/3/2018 8:29:00 AM

'Vistas paint motifs applauding your passion' - magnificent and powerfully romantic write Vijay. Loved it and it's worthy of top honors my friend. Maria :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/3/2018 1:15:00 PM

Thank you Maria.

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/3/2018 7:45:00 AM

The Vistas are passionately portrayed in your wonderfully romantic poem full of beautiful imagery, Good Luck in the contest!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/3/2018 1:15:00 PM

Thank you Mike.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 4/3/2018 7:34:00 AM

Very different kind of romantic poem, Vijay. I mean that in a good way. It is very cerebral. Fabulous lines ... As rising horizon mounts a scenic revision. Announcing congruence of romantic prize. Wonderful poem. Love and joy always.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/3/2018 1:14:00 PM

Thank you Freddie.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/3/2018 7:00:00 AM

Explosion of poetic beauty my dear friend, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/3/2018 1:14:00 PM

Thank you Demetrios.