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Viss and Pinegar

Need help adjusting to an old charmer Just like yesterday I was full of viss and pinegar Lost all my zip Losing my gtip What's up or down seems I need body armour

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Date: 9/30/2021 9:34:00 AM
(chuckling) Liked your limerick because I could relate to it from the first line to the last. Good limerick writing!
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Date: 9/30/2021 4:59:00 AM
Total body transplant will sort you out lol. Hang in there Jack. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/30/2021 5:19:00 AM
I'm working on it Mr Tom!!! LOL
Date: 9/30/2021 4:52:00 AM
as long as your not "vissing penegar"
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/30/2021 5:16:00 AM
Lotsa versions eh (Canadian eh)

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