Viss and Pinegar

Need help adjusting to an old charmer Just like yesterday I was full of viss and pinegar Lost all my zip Losing my gtip What's up or down seems I need body armour
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Hankins Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 9:34 AM
(chuckling) Liked your limerick because I could relate to it from the first line to the last. Good limerick writing!
Cunningham Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 4:59 AM
Total body transplant will sort you out lol. Hang in there Jack. Tom
Ellison Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 5:19 AM
I'm working on it Mr Tom!!! LOL
Lawless Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 4:52 AM
as long as your not "vissing penegar"
Ellison Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 5:16 AM
Lotsa versions eh (Canadian eh)
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