Sandra Adams Poet Ottava rima

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i see you there beneath moon's lambent light
blending within shadows on half lit walls
wry faces of those that are lost from sight
ascending voices heard within night's squalls
why is it you only come out at night
pretending to whisper through winded calls?
those yawls fall silent at the break of dawn
rose skies arise within its blend you're gone



june 24 2019

Rima Ottava sponsored by Charles Messina

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Charles Messina July 1, 2019 at 3:29 PM Very well done Sandra. I really like this poem. Congratulations on your win in my contest! Thank you so much for entering...Hugs Charlie :) Sandra Adams July 1, 2019 at 6:57 PM Thank you so much for the honor of a win... my muse rarely does rhyme, it’s always been a struggle for me so this win means a lot. Thanks for hosting the contest :). Hugs

Nette Onclaud June 24, 2019 at 9:31 PM what a flowing piece , sandra.. i hardly noticed the necessary rhyme requirement... delighted!...huggs Sandra Adams June 25, 2019 at 6:28 AM Thank you Nette, it was a tough one to write hugs

Connie Marcum Wong June 24, 2019 at 2:38 PM This wonderful poem gave me chills in its spectacular ending! I loved this Sandra! xxoo. : ) Sandra Adams June 24, 2019 at 4:31 PM Thank you Connie....it was a hard piece to write I am glad you enjoyed it :) hugs Sandy

Line Gauthier June 24, 2019 at 1:07 PM Bravo, Sandra, Awesome. Sandra Adams June 24, 2019 at 4:32 PM Thank you Line, this challenge was a tough one for me!!!!