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Visitors

scampering, scurrying
     rushing back and forth
   anxious looks, beads of sweat
     merge into rivulets

   the significance of the moment
     all boils down to this   
   the visitors from Planet X2Y*Z
     ~had forgotten how to gape.

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Date: 11/12/2022 4:43:00 AM
Could those visitors be cats with all that scampering and scurrying. The mice visited by aliens. Shrug… :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/12/2022 8:31:00 PM
Rereading this 'gem' now, I think that I went ape. Tee-hee

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