Notes About The Poem

image from pinterest.com

VISITOR AT DUSK

Hush folds over the garden; something unseen rearranges ligt.
Shadows lean in unfamiliar angles listening for a name.
By nightfall, even the world knows--a presence has stepped through the veil.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Hind Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 7:24 PM
you might want to change " ligt" in the first verse to light...but this is a beautiful poem, Sara :)
DiMino Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 6:55 PM
Presence is known beyond our senses 5. Very haunting write. Well done.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace