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Visiting Entity

The closet door rattles and it I ignore
Until the rattling I can ignore no more
It continues to shake all on its own
There is a presence which wishes to be known
My spine tingles, I'm full of fear
As I ponder what lingers near
The walls start tapping, the door creaks
And out of the darkness a voice speaks
Inaudible it is, but sounds grotesque
In my eardrums, the voice infests
I cry out for mercy, I ask it to leave
"Please mr. entity, stop scaring me"
And then it's gone, I feel it disappear
But I know tomorrow night, it will return here

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/22/2015 2:58:00 AM
- Hello Tommy :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/20/2015 11:59:00 PM
Hi Tommy, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/20/2015 10:17:00 PM
Nicely done, Tommy, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/20/2015 6:52:00 PM
ooh how spooky:-) hugs jan xx
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