Visit To Jacksonville Beach Bar

Smoke-filled noisy bar,
debauched disciples of dance,
I do not fit in.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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December 11, 2013 at 9:35 AM
James, the imagery did feel uncomfortable.... xox..LINDA
Tidd Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 9:43 AM
A group of very drunk dancers were nearby. I don't drink much. Wasn't judging them, but they seemed oblivious to others.
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December 11, 2013 at 2:52 AM
Do you never dance or was it too special (^_^)
Tidd Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 9:49 AM
I still like to slow dance.
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