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Visit To Jacksonville Beach Bar

Smoke-filled noisy bar, debauched disciples of dance, I do not fit in.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/11/2013 9:35:00 AM
James, the imagery did feel uncomfortable.... xox..LINDA
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Jim Tidd
Date: 12/11/2013 9:43:00 AM
A group of very drunk dancers were nearby. I don't drink much. Wasn't judging them, but they seemed oblivious to others.
Date: 12/11/2013 2:52:00 AM
Do you never dance or was it too special (^_^)
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Jim Tidd
Date: 12/11/2013 9:49:00 AM
I still like to slow dance.

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