Visions of a Storm

As daylight slowly dissipates 
an assembly of dark clouds gather
moist petrichor air lingers 
burdened beneath its weight.

A restless sensation
      pulses within me
I am alert and watchful 
      as I look expectantly 
into the vast horizon. 

In an instant, I view a flash
        a white hot x-ray
              a jagged razor of lightening 
        streaking across the sky. 

               Pregnant raindrops 
         pummel down from above
    puncturing the dry landscape 
satisfying soak starved plants. 

The scene is brilliant and intense
as nature’s hidden anatomy
is revealed, and maybe a glimpse 
of the heart and soul of heaven. 

I can feel the earth reverberating 
     beneath my feet, shaking with joy
          as if celebrating life
               with a reckless abandon. 

                Brilliant sky scapes transform
          minute by minute, as I witness 
      a living drama, a kaleidoscope 
of heavenly halos 
          a masterpiece to behold. 

As I watch with rapt attention 
awestruck by the power and beauty 
that surround me, I whisper
a prayer of quiet reverence
thanking God for His grand display. 

 

Written on 2/14/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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February 15, 2018 at 8:49 AM
Vivid imagery described so well.. An excellent free verse poem, I do like the language you used here...
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February 15, 2018 at 10:38 AM
Thank you, Silent! I am always encouraged by your words, and taking the time to read my poetry. You are too kind :)
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February 15, 2018 at 6:53 AM
I so enjoyed reading this creative piece from start to finish. You captured the imagery of silent storm in your verses.. flowing with ease. Best for a win, Laura.
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February 15, 2018 at 10:39 AM
Thank you, Vijay! I appreciate your kind words, and taking the time to read my poetry! You are a dear :)
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