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Visions In Blue

A slice of glistening ice mirrors sky. Enchantedly I trace it with my eyes. Periwinkle winks from a butterfly’s wings as he flits among blue daisies’ upturned faces. Merging with mauve, sapphire breathes sublimity to my soul. Stars begin to dance on its canvas. Jan. 7, 2019 for the Blue Poetry Contest of Craig Cornish

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Date: 1/10/2019 8:36:00 AM
Hi Andrea, blue is my favourite colour. A beautiful canvas painted from a palette of wonderful words. I feel such peace as I read through your words. Blue sings in my soul. A fave. have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX. Reads like a winner to me Andrea.
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Date: 1/8/2019 3:19:00 PM
And such a pretty canvas it is, Andrea. Especially loved your description of the butterfly on the blue daisies. Best wishes in Craig's contest! (PS-Took a test and learned I'm a "green.") Hugs, carolyn
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Date: 1/8/2019 6:52:00 AM
Had to "Fav", Andrea; I love blue and this was magical with vibrant imagery in all the right places. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/7/2019 9:21:00 PM
Pretty! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/7/2019 8:30:00 PM
A delightful missive, my friend. Simply delightful! Good luck! I appreciate the alliteration: "sapphire breathes sublimity to my soul." Nice!
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Date: 1/7/2019 6:23:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and feeling, beautiful poem, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/7/2019 5:56:00 PM
Simply delightful, Andrea!
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Date: 1/7/2019 5:49:00 PM
Beautiful, colorful, blue!
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Date: 1/7/2019 5:23:00 PM
Periwinkle winks from a butterfly’s wings...love this line
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