Vision's Echo

See the gorgeous peacock-colors
  crimson, yellow, green, tangerine and blue

Vision's echo: There are two
  one for me ~ one rainbow for you
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Sands Avatar
June 16, 2021 at 3:10 PM
Interesting, I was just looking at a video of a peacock on line before reading this. Beautiful Gershon :)
Wolf Avatar
June 16, 2021 at 5:28 PM
Oh! I just love it when something like this happens. Sometimes everything is just so connected... So cool. Thanks for letting me know, Heidi. Tranquility, Gershon
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June 16, 2021 at 3:09 PM
A double rainbow is a beautiful sight to see, one for each. Lovely couplets Gershon… Belle
Wolf Avatar
June 16, 2021 at 5:26 PM
Honesty time now: I actually had no idea that there existed such a thing as a 'double rainbow!' I thought I was making it up. How about a 'three-bagger?!' lol. Who knew?! Thanks for the education, Belle!
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June 16, 2021 at 3:03 PM
Beautiful couplets, Gershon--I see the colors and feel the echo. Succinctly delivered.
Wolf Avatar
June 16, 2021 at 5:21 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Vijay, and congrats to you again on POTD today! Blessings and Bounty, gw
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