Visions

where did it all go?
she asked as she knocked her drink back

i didn't know what to ask
what? our love or the jack?
stopped short
i never thought those words berfore i said it out
i used to love my words because i never filtered my mouth

never remembered the answer to either
like i'm one hell of a man
i closed my eyes to fight tears
put the drink in my and 

i looked in her eyes and asked what do yo see
thats when i realized there was no one here next to me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 3, 2016 at 11:34 AM
Ps... Terance,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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January 3, 2016 at 11:29 AM
Terance, well done...skat
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