Vision of the World

... I look but i can't see, what's this you see in me. It covers your face with joy when I
Look into your eyes my pure motives shown to you as if you could see right through me; I
understand now... you are as clear as me. But why is it I don't know how you feel, is it
something new something I have never known you to be...?
...something i can look forword to?
...just something you don't yet want to share with me...
None the less I don't need to know don't tell me yet. This is something to keep to 
Yourself until the time is right. If the tide rises because of the moon, then you would
have to be the moon for I am sure that I am the tide...
...Show me something better something I can keep to myself...
...I don't push you to know your limits for I do not yet know...
...tell me your limits, tell me your limits...
...For I stand in the darkness which makes me blind to anything but...
Something has changed in me forcing me to believe in the light forcing me to leave my
veil of darkness behind me. 
Yet the darkness is strong and overpowers many things and even
eventually it over powers the light.
But only durring the night for when morning comes the light will over power all darkness
as you have done to me so...
Shall we do for others...?
I give my heart to you do you return the gesture of my kindness with yours...?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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