Laura Leiser Poet Free verse

Vision of Perfection

She is the vision of perfection
carefully arranging her days
and completing each task.

The cocoon of feeling in control
brings her comfort, keeping at bay
feelings of fear and want.

Neglected as a child, her need
for affirmation runs deep.
She is desperate for love.

Glancing at the mirror she
makes sure she looks happy.
Fear of rejection haunts her.

The day gone, she returns home.
Alone, in the night, the pain sets in
Leaving her in quiet desperation.

She is the vision of perfection
carefully arranging her pills
They bring comfort, keeping her
hurt at bay.


Written on 3/4/2015

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John Fleming March 7, 2015 at 12:53 AM I know someone very much like this. Once this sort of infection sets in it is desperately hard to deal with. I suppose that is what life is all about: Peaks and troughs! However tough we think, or other people might think, we are - we all need a hand up sometimes! Yep...even the toughest of guys - and thats a fact!! :) john. Laura Leiser March 7, 2015 at 9:34 AM I agree with you there, John. I know someone like this, too, and I thought of her when I wrote this. I really care about her, too, and keep her in my prayers.

Emile Pinet March 5, 2015 at 3:03 PM This is sad and full of feelings that emphasizes the deep pain and hurt generated from the rippling effect of lonely years slipping away. Emile. #7 Laura Leiser March 5, 2015 at 3:10 PM Opps, I guess I thought of the wrong contest! But you are a great poet, for sure! Sorry about that :) Laura Leiser March 5, 2015 at 3:07 PM Thanks for your comments, Emile. It's a simple poem, but I wanted it to be plain and clear. By the way, congrats on your win with the Pick A Subject contest! :)