Vision of a Bliss Day
A light
came down from heaven
got confused
with the sun's rays
in a day
happy....
A cloud
separated for a
moment
the show
blue than the sky
offered ... but
the wind suitably
he composed
the cheerful picture
again...
The blued canvas
with the sun
brilliant ... they presented
to everyone
the scenery
of a day
full
of smiles ...
a great day...!
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