Vision After the Sermon

Lovely, lurid red 
Jacob is struggling 
Is this really happening?
I feel lost, between worlds
A white habit to my left
Hands clasped together 
Heaven or Hell? 
The ground is red as blood
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Austin Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 11:13 AM
Reading into or not this grabs my feeling for sermons. Congrats on the selection. daver
Andresen Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 12:29 PM
Wooow....well done Jeremy. - oxox Anne-Lise
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