Vision

View so clear from a very distant perspective
Inclinations and angles wonderfully captioned and analyzed
Sight alone isn’t sufficient. This is coming straight from the mind
In full projection of the future
Only then can a mission be targeted and worked
No wonder Steven Wonder nurtured a great one despite being blind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 8:39 AM
very insightful and inspiring.. :)!
Makama Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 9:38 AM
Thank you so much Olive
Labeau Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 7:43 PM
you are blind steven wonder not my favorite as I sufferer him an all summer in Indonesia please give a break as I call you not doing the other song a favor
Makama Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 9:37 AM
ok???? Thanks for the comment anyway...
Hamilton Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 7:24 PM
very good acrostic Funom hugs 7
Makama Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 9:37 AM
I receive your warm hugs... Thank you so much Hamilton
Bauer Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 6:12 PM
this is wonderful, funom! it's hard to write an acrostic that sounds so good and has such a powerful message. well done!
Makama Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Thank you so much ilene
Devnath  Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 12:10 PM
A beautiful acrostic where vision is clear. Beautifully done, my lovely friend. A 7 i feel. Loved always,bl
Makama Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Thank you so much Devnath
Kiser Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 9:38 AM
Oh, I love Stevie Wonder...this was beautiful, e.g., the way that you describe insight .
Makama Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Thank you so much Kiser
La France Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 8:14 AM
Funom, your Acrostic is purposeful and meaningful, well articulated, I like the form of Acrostic and have done several poems using this form, it is very versatile, an impressed 7 from me, and thank you for visiting my poem, words frozen . . . and for your shining comment, so appreciated, oh and I think Stevie Wonder is such an inspiration . . .
Makama Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Thank you so much Broken Wings
Holmes Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 7:08 AM
Stevie Wonder rules OK!
Makama Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 9:34 AM
Yes.... Thank you so much Holmes
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