Vision

View so clear from a very distant perspective
Inclinations and angles wonderfully captioned and analyzed
Sight alone isn’t sufficient. This is coming straight from the mind
In full projection of the future
Only then can a mission be targeted and worked
No wonder Steven Wonder nurtured a great one despite being blind

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/28/2015 8:39:00 AM

very insightful and inspiring.. :)!

Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2016 9:38:00 AM

Thank you so much Olive

Catherine Labeau

Date: 5/27/2015 7:43:00 PM

you are blind steven wonder not my favorite as I sufferer him an all summer in Indonesia please give a break as I call you not doing the other song a favor

Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2016 9:37:00 AM

ok???? Thanks for the comment anyway...

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/27/2015 7:24:00 PM

very good acrostic Funom hugs 7

Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2016 9:37:00 AM

I receive your warm hugs... Thank you so much Hamilton

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/27/2015 6:12:00 PM

this is wonderful, funom! it's hard to write an acrostic that sounds so good and has such a powerful message. well done!

Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2016 9:36:00 AM

Thank you so much ilene

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/27/2015 12:10:00 PM

A beautiful acrostic where vision is clear. Beautifully done, my lovely friend. A 7 i feel. Loved always,bl

Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2016 9:36:00 AM

Thank you so much Devnath

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/27/2015 9:38:00 AM

Oh, I love Stevie Wonder...this was beautiful, e.g., the way that you describe insight .

Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2016 9:35:00 AM

Thank you so much Kiser

Constance La France

Date: 5/27/2015 8:14:00 AM

Funom, your Acrostic is purposeful and meaningful, well articulated, I like the form of Acrostic and have done several poems using this form, it is very versatile, an impressed 7 from me, and thank you for visiting my poem, words frozen . . . and for your shining comment, so appreciated, oh and I think Stevie Wonder is such an inspiration . . .

Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2016 9:35:00 AM

Thank you so much Broken Wings