Vision

Lost on a misty mountaintop
chasing Hyakoju's fox
distant vistas unclear
draws presence to what's near


an alpine flower
breathes through
the early morning dew
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 24, 2026 at 8:23 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 10, 2016 at 2:15 AM
Ailill Ailill, awesome poem. Linda
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July 7, 2015 at 1:23 PM
AILILL, this is a wonderful write. Enjoyed dropping by to read. Love SKAT
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