Vision - 4th Place

Fierce vision, as sharp as cutter 
One that left my heart to stutter 
A glare that left my soul naked 
Like I was so rogue and wicked 

It looked at me deep to the bone 
Trying to tame my heart of stone 
It tried to steal my will to thrive 
But I won't budge while I'm alive 

4th place 
Five senses poetry contest 
Judged: September 14, 2023 
Sponsor: Sotto Poet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 2:08 PM
Back with congratulations on your winning work in Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Sara
Roger  Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 2:43 PM
Thank you very much... Way to go...
Bowring Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 10:04 AM
A great, powerful, well written poem Roger. Rhymes perfectly. I love the strength of the last line. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.
Roger  Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 11:24 AM
Thank you very much...
Kendrick Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 3:43 AM
Creative lines penned. Thanks for sharing. Sara
Roger  Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 4:24 AM
Thank you very much...
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