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Vision

by the spring in the mist
a spider string, dew kissed
I saw from my stone chair
on its end suspended
an angel descended 
gone with a puff of air
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July 6, 2025 at 5:20 PM
Very effective visual write, methinks. ~ Spy Derr
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July 6, 2025 at 6:06 PM
Thanks Spy Derr. By the way, I name checked your alias, Gershon in a poem called "Encouraging Words" about a week ago, I guess I should have mentioned that. I think it was about a response you made to one of my poems just before that - a poem we've both forgotten.
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