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Vision

by the spring, in the mist a spider string, dew kissed I saw from my stone chair on its end suspended an angel descended gone with a puff of air

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Date: 7/6/2025 5:20:00 PM
Very effective visual write, methinks. ~ Spy Derr
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David Crandall
Date: 7/6/2025 6:06:00 PM
Thanks Spy Derr. By the way, I name checked your alias, Gershon in a poem called "Encouraging Words" about a week ago, I guess I should have mentioned that. I think it was about a response you made to one of my poems just before that - a poem we've both forgotten.

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