Vision

My eyes trace the softness
of her delicate face
a calling
that i  embrace
the look of her beauty
and the way it makes me feel
a soulful shining
in a soliloquy serene
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Allison Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 10:05 AM
you always excel with your romantic lines and this one is a joy to read, love the alliteration in the final lines:-) hope you and the family are ok, i miss the old days of Maurice, Casarah and Darren watson but I guess we all move on in life. hugs Jan xx
Sambourne Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 8:26 PM
Very movingly written, Ts. Your final 2 lines carry the punch of alliteration while conveying a soft landing - the poetic serenity of glowing face. Be well. Brian
Ashley Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 4:16 PM
Dear Ts, your appreciation of her beauty is tenderly expressed. Lovely alliteration in your last two lines. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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