Vision

My eyes trace the softness of her delicate face a calling that i embrace the look of her beauty and the way it makes me feel a soulful shining in a soliloquy serene

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Jan Allison

Date: 4/8/2024 10:05:00 AM

you always excel with your romantic lines and this one is a joy to read, love the alliteration in the final lines:-) hope you and the family are ok, i miss the old days of Maurice, Casarah and Darren watson but I guess we all move on in life. hugs Jan xx

Brian Sambourne

Date: 2/12/2024 8:26:00 PM

Very movingly written, Ts. Your final 2 lines carry the punch of alliteration while conveying a soft landing - the poetic serenity of glowing face. Be well. Brian

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/4/2024 4:16:00 PM

Dear Ts, your appreciation of her beauty is tenderly expressed. Lovely alliteration in your last two lines. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan