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Vision

Visions that gladden the soul As time plays its role, The beauty of nature we adore even as we see and explore. The eyes are the window to the mind, They imprint the images that our minds sometimes find, They search for the missing lines, The lost grapes from the vines. The eyes search through the gloom, They push to attain the bloom. They anchor on what's seen, Forgetting that it’s more than that's been. As time progresses we're dimmed of sight, Then we go gently into the night, Our eyes open in another realm, We're beyond the world's helm. September 13, 2023.

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Date: 9/15/2023 3:44:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 9/15/2023 9:30:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. I'm honoured.
Date: 9/13/2023 6:46:00 PM
I loved the rhyming. It said un\read but it's still gets a fav.
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Date: 9/13/2023 7:05:00 PM
Thank you. It's an honour. Blessings. Please, can you explain more about what the un\read means?
Date: 9/13/2023 11:52:00 AM
I am truly delighted to offer my sincere congratulations for your well-earned win in my contest. Your poetry is truly awe-inspiring.
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Date: 9/13/2023 2:55:00 PM
Thank you, Sotto Poet. It's an honour.

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