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I can see a country road lightly graveled Curved and lined with autumnal leaves See myself walk hand and hand with my lover This cool, crisp fall, in a gentle breeze I see a warm hearth with dying embers As the hot chocolate cups are finally drained And sticky roasted marshmallow remnants Are left upon the wire hangers to be used again How long until we are joined in a perfect union In a life to be loved for its fantastic form A life where no problems linger And a perfect love is newly born

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Howard Kerr

Date: 11/20/2023 9:33:00 AM

Congratulations Sarah on your contest win. A cinematic feast of rich sentiment and vivid colour is captured in a timeless work It’s a privilege to read this. Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/20/2023 10:57:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your review. Thanks for the time spent here, Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/13/2023 11:54:00 AM

Dear Sara, I am truly delighted to offer my sincere congratulations for your well-earned win in my contest. Your poetry is truly awe-inspiring.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/13/2023 1:56:00 PM

Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate you dropping by and letting me know that I placed in your contest. Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 9/9/2023 5:01:00 AM

A life where no problems linger, i wish and imagine a world so calm and beautiful for all as i read this especially. Your way with words is soul warming and so heartfelt. Loved this

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/9/2023 6:39:00 AM

IE, They will be a lovely world someday won't it. I am glad you loved this one. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 9/9/2023 2:14:00 AM

To enjoy the gifts of Fall. Great imagery, so pleasing to read.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/9/2023 3:55:00 AM

I am glad you enjoyed reading it, Victor. Yes, fall has its beauty and comfort with a nice interlude before the cold of winter. How blessed are we to have such a nice break. Sara

Joyce Faure

Date: 9/8/2023 2:24:00 PM

Enjoyed very much Thanks for sharing

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/8/2023 2:55:00 PM

Why, thank you, Joyce. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Tom Woody

Date: 9/8/2023 8:16:00 AM

I believe the world you envision is just around the corner Sara - Matthew 5:5. Lovely poem

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/8/2023 9:34:00 AM

Tom, Yes, the meek shall inherit the earth at some point. How long, oh, Lord, how long. Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara