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Vision

I can see a country road lightly graveled Curved and lined with autumnal leaves See myself walk hand and hand with my lover This cool, crisp fall, in a gentle breeze I see a warm hearth with dying embers As the hot chocolate cups are finally drained And sticky roasted marshmallow remnants Are left upon the wire hangers to be used again How long until we are joined in a perfect union In a life to be loved for its fantastic form A life where no problems linger And a perfect love is newly born
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Kerr Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 9:33 AM
Congratulations Sarah on your contest win. A cinematic feast of rich sentiment and vivid colour is captured in a timeless work It’s a privilege to read this. Howard
Kendrick Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 10:57 AM
I enjoyed reading your review. Thanks for the time spent here, Sara K
Poet Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 11:54 AM
Dear Sara, I am truly delighted to offer my sincere congratulations for your well-earned win in my contest. Your poetry is truly awe-inspiring.
Kendrick Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 1:56 PM
Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate you dropping by and letting me know that I placed in your contest. Sara
Empress Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 5:01 AM
A life where no problems linger, i wish and imagine a world so calm and beautiful for all as i read this especially. Your way with words is soul warming and so heartfelt. Loved this
Kendrick Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 6:39 AM
IE, They will be a lovely world someday won't it. I am glad you loved this one. Thanks for the visit. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 2:14 AM
To enjoy the gifts of Fall. Great imagery, so pleasing to read.
Kendrick Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 3:55 AM
I am glad you enjoyed reading it, Victor. Yes, fall has its beauty and comfort with a nice interlude before the cold of winter. How blessed are we to have such a nice break. Sara
Faure Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 2:24 PM
Enjoyed very much Thanks for sharing
Kendrick Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 2:55 PM
Why, thank you, Joyce. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
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