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Vision

Plants, trees, blossoms, fruits, and thorns too amidst blooms I witness, I come across flies and birds and beasts and insects, and bees; More than these, my vision leads to my cerebral fitness, Perception and conviction of facts and fancies find ease...! Retina, optic nerves, optic chiasm, and optic tracts, Physically work, like parts of a camera, deftly; Psychic vision, within the inner shrine, audits all facts, This leads me, to positive thoughts, words, and actions, gently...! Mental impressions, of the world around, this brings to light, Truths and falsehoods of the realities are put to test; Depth in faith, hope, trust, and fraternity reaches the height, Peace, kindness, forbearance, and faithfulness, are full of zest...! May my vision, like the sun and moon and the stars shine bright, Like millions of candles, the sights of many, may this light...!!!

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Date: 9/15/2023 3:43:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/15/2023 9:09:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 9/13/2023 11:51:00 AM
Dear Alex, I am truly delighted to offer my sincere congratulations on your well-earned win in my contest. Your poetry is truly awe-inspiring
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/15/2023 9:08:00 AM
Thank you very much for giving me an opportunity to take part in your contest. May God Bless You!
Date: 9/4/2023 10:37:00 AM
This is an excellent write in sonnet form on vision, how our inner vision guides us to know the world around us... Nice rhymes too... Glad to see you active here .... Keep inspiring, keep shining Chris... God bless... ~ Ani
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/7/2023 8:45:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You! I am waiting to read your new poems. Kindly write.
Date: 9/4/2023 3:47:00 AM
beautiful write here with a lovely message
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/7/2023 8:44:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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