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I'm trapped in the sleeves of my mourning jacket unable to pull the wool from  my eyes This is my new lense for seeing grief is all encompassing The heart  becomes blind The spirit rages with every sigh ,the soul trying to flee the skin through every tear

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Date: 8/10/2023 6:06:00 PM
mourning is so difficult, the poem transmits such sadness, hope it is fiction, courage to you
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Kelly Hawkins
Date: 8/10/2023 6:12:00 PM
Thank you for your comment..I wish it were fiction as well .I lost my oldest son July 19th..

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